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I want to tell you something although I
Don’t know why I even try.
You were never the type who liked
To listen to what was on my mind,
But I’ll just keep talking anyway.
Maybe this time I’ll get through.

Here’s the thing:
I want to be the reason why
You can’t sleep at night,
Or the reason you don’t eat.
I want you to feel that twist
In your stomach when you see
Something that reminds you of me.

I want you to know the
Feeling of a heart that has been torn.
It beats in your chest, but it still isn't
Enough to convince you that you’re alive.
I want you to feel emptiness every
Time you realize that I’m not there,
And that it is because of you.

Believe me when I say I don’t
Miss you, and that I never could have
Possibly been in love with you.
I want you to see what you've done,
And actually mean it when you say you’re sorry.
I want so many things that will never happen
All because you were better than I was.
Words, words, words.
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MockingJay1256 Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well written! Loaded with emotion! :)
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DeadOrSleeping Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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MockingJay1256 Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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:iconthecrazymagnet:
Reminds me of one of my favourite songs...you've captured a really powerful feeling :heart:
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DeadOrSleeping Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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BeAnIndividual Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am officially in love with this poem. Its so well written, and really gets a relatable message across. I feel the exact same way about someone right now..... and this describes how I feel perfectly. excellent job. truly excellent.
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DeadOrSleeping Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
And I'm sorry to hear you know how it feels. It will get better soon!
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Enerqy Feb 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Words, but great and honest words. I didn't quite catch the last line though :/
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DeadOrSleeping Feb 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you. :) And the last line is kind of hard for me to explain..
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Enerqy Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
No worries, hope you have a great week!
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