Your words are woven
Together so carefully
That no one could possibly
Find a single hole in them.
No one can see the emotions you hide,
Or what you really did last night.
No one can see the real you.
No one, but me.
A short poem I wrote for my creative writing class.
i like the way you wove a fairly complicated bunch of words together into a seamless fabric.... not a web, because you don't intend to trap anything
Very nice. Expressive yet cryptic. Almost has the feel of an anonymous letter to someone
Busted! I like how the speaker's words are woven together as carefully as the accused recipient's.