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Your words are woven
Together so carefully
That no one could possibly
Find a single hole in them.
No one can see the emotions you hide,
Or what you really did last night.
No one can see the real you.
No one, but me.
A short poem I wrote for my creative writing class. :)
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justdeva Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
i like the way you wove a fairly complicated bunch of words together into a seamless fabric.... not a web, because you don't intend to trap anything
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Writer
That's a really great way of putting it! Thanks! :)
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Xeperpharos Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. Expressive yet cryptic. Almost has the feel of an anonymous letter to someone
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Writer
Maybe it is... haha. And thank you! :)
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:iconjtcheney:
jtcheney Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well done.
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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:iconjtcheney:
jtcheney Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
welcome, D.O.S
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Jewel-Firefly Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
Busted! I like how the speaker's words are woven together as carefully as the accused recipient's.
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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