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I think I might need you,
But here's the thing:
I'm spinning out of control
And careening off the side of the road.
I pretend to hold on to the wheel,
But we both know I'll crash.

It wasn't a fair fight.

If you would listen,
If you would actually listen,
You would hear me whispering
"I want you."
"I need you."
"You're mine."


And if you would listen,
If you would actually listen,
You would know that
We are horribly wrong
For each other,
And that my words mean nothing.

But what's to stop us from
Sharing our sheets anyway?
We sleep folded together
Like slips of origami paper
Pressed so tightly that
We could not possibly split.

I think I might need you,
But here's the thing:
I really wish I didn't.
I wish it was you,
And not me.
I always care too much...
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chocolate-ninja-6 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I am experiencing the same thing, except I'm the one who is watching from the side lines wishing I could stop them from doing this...very beautiful by the way
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! And I'm sorry you're going through a similar situation. :(
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geralsv Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I so can relate to this.
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Fasiafloho3-is-I Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Ooh this has a nice rhythm.
That second to last verse has this precise and delicate descriptiveness to it that kind of ties the whole poem together.
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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crabsnake Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012   Photographer
This is beautiful
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
So profound and wondrous <3
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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