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The clouds are heavy tonight,
And I am suffocating,
Choking on my own words
As they fly from my mouth.

You never cared about yourself,
And after your death that
Became hard to think about.
(But I do anyway.)

I suddenly find myself missing
The years we had spent together
And how spider webs would form in
The corners of your eyes when you smiled.

But the thing is that I can’t hear you anymore.
I can’t remember the sound
Of your voice or the feeling of
Your hands as they touched my lips.

You once told me that home
Is where you lie,
But I hate it here, and
I hate living with these ghosts.
I was doing so great too...
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JoKuLFrOsTiGuArDiAn Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful?
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Writer
thank you? hahaha :)
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JoKuLFrOsTiGuArDiAn Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome!
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
Need a hug?
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Writer
Bahah! I'll be okay. :D
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Writer
Yay!!!
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Fasiafloho3-is-I Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
This is deep.
And fresh.
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! :)
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MoonfalltheDragon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Wow! It's really emotional and detailed-nice job! :)
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
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Skysetting Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is very...meaningful, emotional and touching...it's great!!
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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Skysetting Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem^^ You're welcome ;)
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Raejan Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
this is so good! It's nice to see that there are still some unique writers out there
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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Raejan Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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