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I am wishing I wasn't alone,
That my brain would shut off,
That people would listen
When I whisper the undeniable truth.
But if no one listens
Then who the hell cares?

I am wishing that you were here
To smother my nightmares
And make me feel like I am safe.
If they can't see what I see
When I close my eyes
Then is it really there?

I am wishing that you still loved me,
That you would feel more for me
Than you do for her,
But I will never be good enough.
If you hold me and say everything is fine
Will it be a lie?

And I just wish you would say something
Because the silence screams
More truth than I can take.
And I just miss the sound of your voice like crazy.
But if I can't feel my own heart beating in my chest
Does that mean I am no longer living?

I don't know…
I am numb.
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mariswood Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it, simple yet deep. Congrats :clap:
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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starell Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
This is so very beautiful! I love the structure and the way you relate to all of humanity! Wonderful poem!
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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starell Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
you are most welcome!
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frei76 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
wow! once you have spoken to my heart and described what I feel at this moment of my life ... I wish I could use words in this way, but I have only my modest photos... so thank you! :heart:
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
you are very welcome! Thank you for liking it. :D
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frei76 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
:D :hug:
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Natafin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student General Artist
:heart:
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DeadOrSleeping Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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